Spirit Wins

Lies laid bare
the spell was broken.
wounded and Liberated
Incongruent.

Ego, a rabid dog
scampers and digs
for reasons to flagellate
and fester in sticky resentment;
the script, familiar 
and falsely empowering;
Ever anxious for its emotional support bone.

Spirit,
knows liberation and peace
Freedom from polluting pheromones
and bestial desires
bent in award repose
across Fantasy’s dais;
pauses, breaths
then
Soars.

Original

Lies laid bare
the spell was broken.
Wounded and Liberated
Incongruent

the Ego, a rabid dog
scampers and digs
for reasons to flagellate
and fester in sticky resentment
the script, familiar 
and falsely empowering;

the Spirit
knows liberation and peace
Freedom from polluting pheromones
and bestial desires
bent in award repose.